((Hi guys. Finally finished writing this evaluation for Zumi. I would love for some criticism, if you guys do not mind. Seeing as I hate going in the chatroom anymore, I worked hard on this. Took a long time to figure out what to write for Zumi. Alright. Enjoy, and please criticize.))
Where am I? It.. it's so dark. Maybe I... fell out of bed?
The room was cold and pitch black. The floor was like ice. It was very cold and hard. Nothing was able to be seen, even if it was five inches from her face. Creepy... Very creepy. Zumi started to get up from the cold floor she had been lying on for heaven only knows how long, and tried to wait for h